Have a look at the collage below and tell me, should i add more or leave it as is? i just don't feel right with it in its current state, but i'm not sure if i should add something.
hey, mamacita -- hope you had a great mother's day! :) I'd add more. I like collages to be overly busy and with a subject matter like 'home,' you've got lots of room to run! love what you've done thus far. hope to see you soon!
How big is it Jessica? I really like it. So many layers and things to catch your eye. I think a frame around it would suffice for me. Even a drawn one. I'm feeling like the elements need to "pull together" and a drawn line frame or twine glued around the edges or even a real wooden frame would help the concept meld for me. But I do really like it and am impressed.
Jess... I love love LOVE this! I'm with Dana. I think some kind of simple framing would pull it all together. I think where you feel "unfinished" with it is that the white just kind of wanders away into nothing. So, a frame would indeed give it the substance you're looking for.
Thanks for the feedback, guys! i think i'll start by adding a frame - that might just be what it needs. Dana - it's 6"x6", i'm pretty sure. It's at home and i'm not, but it's roughly that size.
Oh this is lovely! I just love the house and the windows! I really like it as it is, but perhaps you could add something to the top left corner as it looks a bit bottom/right heavy. What about a little bird? :)
hey, mamacita -- hope you had a great mother's day! :) I'd add more. I like collages to be overly busy and with a subject matter like 'home,' you've got lots of room to run! love what you've done thus far. hope to see you soon!
ReplyDeleteHow big is it Jessica?
ReplyDeleteI really like it. So many layers and things to catch your eye. I think a frame around it would suffice for me. Even a drawn one. I'm feeling like the elements need to "pull together" and a drawn line frame or twine glued around the edges or even a real wooden frame would help the concept meld for me.
But I do really like it and am impressed.
Jess... I love love LOVE this! I'm with Dana. I think some kind of simple framing would pull it all together. I think where you feel "unfinished" with it is that the white just kind of wanders away into nothing. So, a frame would indeed give it the substance you're looking for.
ReplyDeleteThat being said... I want it! :-D So cool.
Thanks for the feedback, guys! i think i'll start by adding a frame - that might just be what it needs.
ReplyDeleteDana - it's 6"x6", i'm pretty sure. It's at home and i'm not, but it's roughly that size.
Oh this is lovely! I just love the house and the windows! I really like it as it is, but perhaps you could add something to the top left corner as it looks a bit bottom/right heavy. What about a little bird? :)
ReplyDeletei add birds to everything, would hate to be redundant! Thanks for the feedback, Katie.
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